More people than ever before travel to other countries than ever before. Why this has happened? Is this a positive development or negative?
In recent years, the number of people travelling abroad has increased significantly. From my point of view, I believe this tendency has both negative and positive effects. In this essays, I will try to address the tendency’s causes and discuss its impacts.
There are many reasons why people nowadays visit other countries, the most common reason for it is to go on holidays. Thanks to the rapid development of air planes, people now can easily access to any country in the world with the cheapest cost ever. Moreover, holiday destinations recently have many advertisements and promotions to attract global travellers whereby increasing the number of people selecting foreign destinations instead of local ones. Besides that, because of globalisation progress, many barriers such as language are narrowed; hence, it is easier for some others, especially young people to go to foreign places for new experiences, education or work.
The effects of this development vary with both advantages and disadvantages. On one hand, it is obvious that travelling industry is very important, many countries nowadays have significant revenue comes from travelling industry. Besides that, it also increases exchange and competitiveness in educations, jobs and culture, which raises the development of many social aspects. On the other hand, as a result of globalisation, many experts from developing countries choose to settle down in developed countries, which expands the already wide development gap between countries. Moreover, it weakens small cultures and rare languages because many people tend to adapt things that more popular.
To conclude, travelling abroad is an inevitable trend, which can cause positives and negatives either. Both Individuals and governments should carefully consider its effects to take advantage of it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, hence, if, moreover, so, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60791366906 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04423888751 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63309352518 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8781104712 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.357142857 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240875656425 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768573444555 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427833810556 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130007616414 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396312884268 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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