The trend of travelling from one place to another is commonly observed among different communities. In my perspective the major reason is globalization and it will be a positive development due to surge in the economy and cultural exchange.
The main cause of travelling is the conversion of entire world in the small global village. Owing to the fact that, travelling become easier, people can easily travel from one place to the other place via different sorts of transport, and they want to explore more and more about the other places of the world. Therefore, they gain knowledge by visiting at other places which not only assist them to widen their mental zone, but also helped out them to learn more: cuisines of foreign countries, traditions and rituals, history and to enjoy weather. To cite an example, a survey conducted by National Tourism Organization in the USA, in 2020, revealed that 50% revenue of Newyork city was earned from tourism.
The primitive influence on the visited country will be better economy. Since foreigners journeyed from their own places to the other places to sale and purchase goods, local businesses will gradually gain more profit from travellers, and even the hotels, museums will visited by a large number of people on daily basis which will be a source of earning money from the people who will visit at those places; resultantly, the entire nation is developed more as compare to the past when no tourism takes places.
Furthermore, the culture can be shared by majority of people. Because people who visited at other places have curiosity to explore about their language and lifestyle, people tried to look like them to intermingle with the locals to the visited places mainly to feel comfortable and to look like them. Hence, people share their cultural values as well as to become multilingual specifically for the creation of egalitarian society and for the better career in terms of job and study. For instance, had my friend, Jackeline, never learnt French in school when she was living in India, she could not have got the desirable job in France.
In Conclusion, the main reason can be the global world which enables people to learn more and more. Owing to the raising businesses in the country along with the intermingling of different people, I am convinced that given argument is logically sound.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 269, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'visit'
Suggestion: visit
...lers, and even the hotels, museums will visited by a large number of people on daily ba...
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Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ven the hotels, museums will visited by a large number of people on daily basis which will be a s...
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Line 5, column 457, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ly, the entire nation is developed more as compare to the past when no tourism tak...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, look, so, therefore, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1970.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 395.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98734177215 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59973745485 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544303797468 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.6372996063 49.4020404114 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.714285714 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2142857143 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116390443053 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407421395844 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337234904989 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0701691850954 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192237879761 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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