More people live alone today than they did in the past. Do you think this is positive or negative development ?
In our contemporary society living alone is believed to be the most suitable choice rather than live with the family, partner or make new family. Many negative and positive points are brought by this condition. I personally believe that the number of demerits are outweighed. In this essay I will put forth some reasons to support my view before arriving at conclusion.
First and foremost, from the date of mankind existence, human always have preferred to living together even in shape of small group or tribe For surviving, hunting or meeting their primary needs. Although, nowadays there is no necessity for living together in comparison with many years ago, due to remarkable advancement in technology, people for some compelling reason have lived together inevitably. For instance breeding and upbringing children. Therefore, when the increasing number of people have attempt to live solely, they make a big barrier in front of this concept.
Secondly, despite the fact that people have tended to live alone, they need to communicate with other human in term of mental health. Based on scientist recent investigation, it is claimed that being alone for a long time instilling devastating effects on human mind. A good illustration is depression which is called the silent and the most prevalent illness of the modern communities. Therefore, not only cause soleness many mental diseases, but also if people get accustomed to it , it could be the warning element for mankind societies.
In conclusion, given the above consideration, on no account can not human live alone even with accessibility to progressive technology. People during centuries always live in communities and have communication and always try to simplify with strong determination for inviting new facilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34042553191 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93765626315 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63475177305 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3485368663 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.571428571 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182223624366 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616465261728 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525232378453 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110992711234 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319673492323 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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