More people today are overweight than ever before.
What are the primary causes of this?
What measures can be taken to overcome this epidemic?
It is comprehensible that mankind is witnessing a devastating recession of physical health nowadays especially the obesity has became a global phenomenon. This circumstance is attributed to the popularity of an unhealthy lifestyle and I strongly believe that tax is an essential tool to suppress this disease.
On the one hand, there are two prime reasons leading to this controversial issue. First of all, a great deal of people get addicted to junk foods which lead to numerous detrimental effects. According to the analysis of many scientists, because fast food comprises a copious amount of cooking oil. As a result, their health will be wrecked if they still go along with this unhealthy lifestyle. The second, it is evident that people today not only spend most of their time to work but they also attempt to strengthen the relationship with other people. Consequently, they will be at risk about the weight due to the lack of physical activities. Vietnam perfectly exemplifies this situation, after working time, instead of doing exercise such as the gym, swimming and so on, counterparts always hang out to drink alcohols or eat street food.
Several viable solutions can be implemented to mitigate the aforementioned issues. The authorities should levy a steep tax on these notorious products in order to regulate the boom of fast food. Therefore, it will extremely diminish the obesity and make an outstanding contribution to reform a good habit for everyone. Another optimal solution is that individuals are responsible for playing sports more frequently. If people broaden their horizons about the vital role of sports, they will be triumphant to keep fit and avoid many ills.
To conclude, the overweight is likely to generate a huge gap in daily relationship. I completely believe that both the governments and individuals should address this issue together for the sustainable development of nations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...lth nowadays especially the obesity has became a global phenomenon. This circumstance ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, second, so, still, then, therefore, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27922077922 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02118196721 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655844155844 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1577532447 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.625 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152698599606 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433672992164 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323064723907 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826081011513 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168630910011 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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