Vast number of juveniles are migrating to metropolitan areas in search of quality education and employment opportunities. This essay will argue merits and demerits with relevant examples and logical conclusion.
In the beginning , central city areas provide better amenities and opportunities to everyone irrespective of their ages. These include excellent Medical facilities , incredible leisure activities, job opportunities, better quality and well built houses, excellent picnic destinations, quality of education, law following citizens which is more supreme as far as the pastoral areas are concerned. Because of all these comforts , youngsters tend to relocate themselves into these civilised areas. For example, a recent study showed that in 2018, 75% of the population resettled in UK to pursue their education and settlement respectively. Hence, civil areas offer extensive comforts and leisure and youngsters get immensely benefited and relocate to urban areas.
On the other hand , larger cities tend to be more expensive. As population density creates larger markets with more opportunities., higher incomes and greater demand which drives up prices. So for the newcomers it becomes significantly difficult to get high paid jobs immediately. For instance, the hamburger in Sydney is for $19.17 while the nearby states offer the same hamburger for 9$, which is significantly high in urban areas. Thus, developed areas are expensive.
In conclusion, this essay argued that, although downtown areas provide all sorts of leisure and comforts but they are excessively exorbitant. In my opinion, I strongly believe that, in order to secure the future, people should settle in smart cities. Thus, positive merits outweigh the negative arguments.
- MORE YOUNG PEOPLE ARE LEAVING THEIR RURAL AREAS TO URBAN CITIES TO STUDY AND WORK WHAT DO YOU THINK ARE THE REASONS DO ADVANATGES OUTWEIGH ITS DISADVANTAGES 78
- More and more people work from home and study from home with the development of computer technology Do you think it is positive or negative development 72
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69294605809 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99019639304 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659751037344 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1267927413 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0666666667 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116420630348 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379658918659 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0279387239617 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0601484018977 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277869841711 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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