Most artists earn low salaries and should therefore receive funding from the government in order for them to continue with their work.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Considering both low wages of artists and the significant social earnings of the quite broad mixture of art fields together, the efforts of the governments for subsidizing them to stay in touch with their profession seems to be reasonable.
Looking at the rapidly changing world in which the most occupations would be replaced with high-tech robots that can handle the humankind repetitive jobs, the influential effect of art on rising a generation who are armed with creativity and innovation; the characteristics that couldn’t be stimulated by most sophisticated technologies, is immeasurable.
Focusing on the objectives of art, it is created to enhance the social standards by attacking what is thought of convention in modern societies. Another feature that is worth mentioning is the ability of an artist to introduce a nation’s cultural values to unknown people by making compelling artworks and representing them in international exhibitions.
Although in most cases the government must help artists to create a lucrative industry, the new developments of technologies for instance NFTs which are certifications of ownership and selling them online could be also beneficial for the bottom line as much as governments fund, if not better.
To conclude, we may interest the young by teaching them the most integral abilities to overcome job insecurity in the not-too-distant future by art. Moreover we should leverage the artist's profound capabilities in redeveloping peoples’ notions. However, this doesn’t mean that the only way for making money out of art can be provided just by governments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 150, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...y in the not-too-distant future by art. Moreover we should leverage the artists profound...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, for instance, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52208835341 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29757272906 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650602409639 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.8599877708 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.875 106.682146367 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.125 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212337927862 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801232674896 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562522438181 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110448245089 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528539286902 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.33 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.63 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 9.78957915832 225% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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