Most artists earn low salaries and therefore government should receive funding from government in order for them to continue with their work.
What extent do you agree or disagree?
This is a fact that arts are pride for any nation through which people can express their ideas and feelings. It is thought by some people that higher authorities should provide financial aid to those earning not enough money in oder to let them continue their work. While i believe that government should support low salaried artists, allocating funds may lose their efforts in creation of arts.
On the one hand, Government must keep up lower salaried artists in order to make them able to continue their work. Firstly, In today’s materialistic world people are continuously cutting down interests in variety of arts such as visual arts that are comprise of paintings, drawings and sculptures as well as stories, literature books etcetera as they are under influence of technical advancements likewise computer games, television and internet. Therefore, spending time on arts is regarded as monotonous so government should promote arts to make the world a beautiful place to live. Secondly, people attract towards those lucrative professions rather than art work as there are less employment opportunities in this field. Hence, The regime should appeal people to show hidden talent via arts by opening vistas for people. Finally, artists are earning less money even some small artists can not survive in this past paced world. That is why authorities should provide assistance to make them feel confident about their work.
On the other hand. Granting finance to artists can have some reverse effects that i am going to describe. First of all, people burn mid night oil for earning more and more money; however, if government would fund these artists then they will loose their efforts as they will get enough money to earn bread and butter. Consequently, neither of them will take care of arts in the country. In addition to this, The attention will be focused on money instead of arts that are assets of the country that will make them craving for the money.
To conclude, Although allotting funds to artists is a good way to continue their work and for their survival yet i think this phenomenon have detrimental effects on artists.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, likewise, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, as for, even so, i think, such as, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04507042254 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53532707091 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571830985915 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.7102916383 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.9375 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1875 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0625 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275316049099 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932242719291 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765947268384 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182534043536 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423212489288 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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