In recent decades the amount of crime is rising and one of the possible solution to tackle this issue is prison while several people strongly claim that giving the education for perpetrators is a bit more effective. However, I partly agree with the first statement due to only strict discipline may return their to normal life.
To begin with, punish violators always was quite a complex situation. As regards prison, it is an undeniable solution for the government by a virtue of a convenient solution such as a country budget and appropriate value in society. To illustrate, in China put special emphasis on violators of laws, regardless of what they did. Every year goes to jail approximately 1 million crowds, despite types of crime and it is working. Nowadays we can see that China one of the safest countries without corruption and lawlessness.
By contrast, a bunch of people argued that the government should use prisons just for grave crimes such as murderer or huge thefts. Perhaps giving education will contribute to reducing a few crimes such as administrative violations whilst it also may lead to undesirable consequences. For instance, the vast majority of persons with tremendous violations can easy avoid judgment and the number of culprits may experience considerably rise. Consequently, this experince will be extremely complex to handle it.
To sum up, both views have their own significance, while I strongly claim that only a serious approach for each situation can solve this.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, so, while, as regards, for instance, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13469387755 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92632282301 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657142857143 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4999163319 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.833333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4166666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195694431995 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609285449578 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058280787341 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105331930634 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515939048572 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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