In recent decades, several people claim that living a convenient life depends on tremendous money while others against and confirm that a huge profit may contribute to an unpleasant effect. These two sides have their own strong arguments whilst from my point of view getting a huge salary has a positive impact as well as drawbacks.
Firstly, money always was on certain attention due to it has plenty of benefits. However, possessing a lot of money may bring multiple issues including taxes or excessive expenditure. To illustrate, according to state regulations, financial police have access to check your source of profit. For this reason, if you have an illegal income they will cause you to a felony. Secondly, gaining a lot of income will turn people lazy perhaps their kids which further will be the inevitable consequences which mold the future. Therefore, as refer to these examples it is obvious that huge revenue also has negative aspects.
On the one hand, despite the severe problems of huge profit, it seems to me that big salary has multiple beneficial effects such as dealing with problems related to poverty. For instance, by earning a huge salary you can allocate it reasonably for a poor family like buying them home or pay the expenses. Consequently, money plays a crucial role in people's life.
To conclude, the benefits and drawbacks of huge money depending on spending it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 16, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'was'.
Suggestion: was always
...t as well as drawbacks. Firstly, money always was on certain attention due to it has plen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00429184549 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66183703698 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673819742489 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3625421209 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171676517066 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611244366496 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406430061546 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0938160702278 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261593343441 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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