The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
t's believed that the most important purpose of science should be to better people's lives. I totally agree with it as in the first place, science was invented to make life easier and more convenience.
Firstly, the expense for operating researches and building scientidic facilities is often funded by people and governments all over the world either through taxes or fund raising. This is why it should repay by improving the living of people as they put in big efforts to earn that money. For example, farmers spend millions on scientific studies which try to breed a new revolutionary crops. In turns, these crops promte the efficency of algicultrural production and aid the financial ability of these people.
Secondly, science has the great ability to transform our life in many different ways. Especially, since the emergence of electricity and digital technology, sceince have significantly enhanced human's communiacation, transportation, and overall convennience.Beside productivity, breakthroughs in science provide employment, education opportunities .An apparent evidence is the invention of underground trains. These trains greatly reduce traffic jams, shorten the time needed for a worker to get to his office.
In conclusion, with the initial origin of science being people lives and its enormous capability, I completely agree the utmost aim of science is to improve the quality of life. With that being said, it is also necessary for people to find ways to fully utilize to greatness of science.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41525423729 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13815744899 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682203389831 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.0433116089 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.181818182 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4545454545 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216332350115 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781655103393 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706740116998 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133808562232 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733138874302 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.