The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, the role of science has became more and more important, and many people state that it is necessary for scientists to enhance humans' life through the achievements of science. In my perspective, I completely agree with this idea and in this essay I will give reasons to support my opinion.
To begin with, there are several noticeable benefits when applying science in medical field. One of them is helping to discover a new cure methods or medicine more easy, which would open a new world for treating and preventing the upcoming diseases. Through the massive number of achievements in science in the past and modern facilities in research field, the door for a better life is as near as possible. A case in point is the vaccine for Covid-19 viruses, which is completed within a year. In other words, the nature of science also plays a vital role in creature research including human and animals, having the opportunities to acknowledge deeply into human body; therefore, scientists could be capable to solve the mysteries, which haven't had the answer.
On the other hand, in a victuals' perspective, people could have genetically modified food, which is modified to be beneficial various human's purposes. With the application of science, several educational appliances could be used to create an enhanced learning environment with students accessing to the world of knowledge in many ways. Consequently, the governments would have the high-quality human resources , which would be very advantageous for the economy to become a stronger nationality. For instance, Japan, the country with the decision of fully investment into human, become one of the most powerful country in modern world, if the citizens are ignored by their government, there would be no chance for the wealthy.
In conclusion, there is only one purpose for everything that is created by human, is to help people come closer to their goals. Personally, I believe science is created to be beneficial people due to its indisputable merits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'victuals'' or 'victual's'?
Suggestion: victuals'; victual's
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14893617021 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88196953367 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562310030395 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.5694510735 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.307692308 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3076923077 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169914495946 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612032919616 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0302003718382 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107406596365 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214496406372 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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