The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Over the last 20 years, advanced IT innovations have been applied more frequently in various spheres thanks to scientific research.It is considered that the purpose of scientific achievements should be to upgrade people's lives,and I partially agree with this statement.The aim of this essay is to examine whether the study of materials could be vital or not in the lifestyle of human beings.
On the one hand,some scientists conduct experiments in the hope of adding to their knowledge.In other words, some scientific discoveries are used with the goal of harming people. For example,science's first invention about the atomic bomb was used as a weapon of war by Americans to harm the city of Nagasaki,Japan during the war in 1945 .Consequently,advances in scientific research destroyed the whole community,and the invention of harmful things still continues,challenging people’s lives with the feeling of fear.
On the other hand,there are a couple of applications of science in day-to-day life.In other quarters,scientific inventions uplift the way people live in terms of transportation as it simplifies long-distance travelling. As an example of this,various high-speed vehicles,electric engines, and motorcycles were discovered with the help of science . Accordingly,these vehicles have totally changed the phase of our society. It reduces the travelling time and effort of every human being.
To sum up,all aforementioned points illustrate that upsurging scientific inventions can lead to both positive and negative consequences.As far as I am concerned,If science did not refine, the world would make their lives more difficult and remain in the 19th century now.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, consequently, first, if, so, still, for example, in other words, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66666666667 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.76213581503 2.80592935109 134% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.050597079 49.4020404114 229% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 178.5 106.682146367 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.25 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184695180099 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627601161116 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615882934999 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101216259981 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615861065273 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.2 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.44 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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