In recent years, a large number of people trust that the main purpose of science is developing our lives. In my opinion, I totally agree with this point of view due to some reasons like the improvement of our health and supporting quotidian tasks.
It is undeniable that science plays a crucial role as a root of the tree in the development of our technology in numerous fields which help our daily works become more comfortable day by day. Thanks to advances in scientific field in recent decades, we are using cars or planes to transport to any locations around the world in some hours instead of months in the past. In addition, there are a large percentage of things that associated with our lives such as smartphones, refrigerator or bridges are the results after a number of years investigate of scientists. All of these are tended to be seem as the greatest achievements of the science.
Besides that, another reason why science research should prioritize the betterment of people’s lives is its impacts on healthcare. Scientific research has led to remarkable breakthroughs in the way of making medicine, treatments which decreased the proportion of death for patients. For example, the discovery of covid vaccine significantly contribute to the prevention in spreading of virus and saving billion of residents in countries. By reaching further steps on medical research, science could continue protecting human from suffering and enhance overall health outcomes.
In conclusion, I truly believe that the primary aim of science should be to enhance people’s lives. Because through advancements in technology and healthcare could bring countless positive transformation to our lives.
- The chart below gives information about how families on one country spent their weekly income 1968 and in 2018 78
- The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 56
- Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones Why is this case Do you think this is a positive or negative development 67
- the chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007 2011 and 2015 78
- The most important aim of science should be to improve people s lives To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
In recent years, a large number of people trust that the main purpose of s...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... positive transformation to our lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25735294118 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00658878541 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4818792991 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.166666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157632397201 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544298884923 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475073946701 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925599545716 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251635314201 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.