The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is widely believed that many people choose their works depended on the size of the salary offered. This essay will discuss my point of view by elaborating my ideas. Personally, I strongly disagree with the statement that money is the enssential consideration when seeking for a career because I believe that other factors are also important.
To begin with, I believe that other considerations are just as important as what we earn in our jobs. Firstable, suitable for interests and the fields of study is definitely a main motivation when selecting a job. The reason is when choosing a job that also the strength, it will lead to a career advancement, beside, the job is extremely enjoyable and we will feel satisfied. Additionally, that job may be an opportunity for people who have a proposition to start up a business to experience.
Nevertheless, I agree that money is needed for individuals in order to meet their basic needs. For example, people have to pay for housing, food, bills, health care, and education. For that reason, many people prioritize that salary play an important role in choosing the occupation. However, the most important things in the world are health and happiness. In this case, personal relationships and the atmosphere in a workplace are truly necessary. For instance, you get a high paying job but you have bad colleagues and stressful work environment. So not only your productivity can seriously go down but also your health. Last but not least, some people take a job due to they want help others and contribute something positive to society. As the philanthropist, charities, volunteers and numerous people do.
In conclusion, there are numerous arguments about the problem that people choose their occupation based on income they received such as some that I mentioned above. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with the statement that money outweighs all other factors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, may, nevertheless, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07911392405 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96416636619 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579113924051 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6464360328 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1666666667 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261897786238 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670527259294 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051390478088 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13714522318 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518543921527 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.