most large companies nowadays operate multi-nationally. To what extend do multi-national companies have responsibility towards local communities in which they operate?
Globalisation in the modern days has facilitated multi-national enterprises’ operations outside the confines of border. In my opinion, while generating profit remains the fundamental principle of corporations, they must also conduct their business in a socially responsible manner in areas in which they are based
In terms of social welfare, multi-national companies should create work for local residents and ensure that they are receiving adequate salaries as well as basic healthcare and insurances. The horrors of industrial revolution must be avoid- child labour, starvation wages and unhealthy working condition. Apart from that, enterprises that operate internationally are entailed to strictly abide by the local law, especially taxtation, to contribute to the local state budget to improve living condition in the area and maintain social stability. Finally, firms should also recognize the importance of sending aids to the deprived within the region they are based, since they have enough resources to make that possible. Philanthropic actions such as granting scholarships or donations, for example, can help the people in need and enhance company’s image at the same time.
From the environmental perspective, corporations must operate with utmost responsibility to safeguard the local natural resources and environment. Local communities may rely on such resources to survive, irresponsible exploitation of natural resources may not only leaves devastating consequences to the environment but it will also hinder the economic activities of the residents in the regions. Unregulated oil extraction of firms such as Shell or Texaco, for example, may result in oil spills which devastate the local fishing industry, as the incident in Alaska has shown. Furthermore, overexploitation results in degraded soil quality and pollution which in the long run damage local natural protection against disasters namely flood, landslide, bushfires, etc.
In conclusion, multi-national companies must not make profit at the expense of the welfare of the residents in the areas where they are operating.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 766, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...namely flood, landslide, bushfires, etc. In conclusion, multi-national companies ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, may, so, well, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1801.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79099678457 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25441325475 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617363344051 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.2955073996 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.727272727 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2727272727 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7272727273 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276101926077 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935364827292 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721281354069 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172336199744 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443987412472 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 17.68 50.2224549098 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.8 11.3001002004 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.6 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.27 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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