It is true that some people claim that lenghthening the time one has to serve in prisons is the most effective way to reduce crime although others believe that there are better alternatives.
On the one hand, the claim that extending prison sentences may eradicate crime may be justifiable regarding the fact that severer punishments often work as deterrents against wrong-doers. Prisons work to correct misconduct and punish criminals by using psychological methods. Prisoners are isolated with the outside world, with their leisure time restricted to only a couple of hours per day, and most of their rights are taken away from them. Therefore, this horrendous lifestyle is thought to be an effective method to correct criminals and terminate future criminal intents. Most hardened criminals, for example, often receive life sentences as an example to prevent future criminals.
On the second hand, it is myopic to believe such method is a cure-all because not every man suffers from his own conscience which is what prison uses to punish and correct wrong-doers. The Ice man, for example, killed a hundred people without suffering any traumas. Therefore, lengthening the sentences of these people will be a waste of time and resources. Furthermore, a majority of criminals act out of financial burden and mental issues. Hence, the best way to reduce crime is not to longer sentences but target the root of the problem- mental treatment and reintergration of prisoners into the society-and this can be done in numerous ways. Havard University, for example, provide vocational courses to prisoners and help them be prepared for a fresh start. Moreover, prisons can include psychological therapies to treat prisoners with disorders and help them cope with future problems namely stress, discrimination, etc.
In conclusion, there are more effective ways o reduce crime other than extending prison sentences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 979, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
...e problems namely stress, discrimination,etc. In conclusion, there are more effecti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, so, then, therefore, as to, for example, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28716216216 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92182467667 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574324324324 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8113601263 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.384615385 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291432781473 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985629650259 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10323140597 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215273021829 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924752577346 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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