most people agree that money cannot be happiness.
why is happiness difficult to understand?
how can people achieve happiness?
Many people claim that happiness is not measuring with money. The following essay takes a look at both sides of this argument that why it is not easy to determine happiness and how is the person can get it.
In the first place, it is true that defining what is the happiness it is sometimes difficult for people. In general, money and happiness are so close to each other. For example, if someone is so rich but ill, so he or she can afford to treat in great hospitals but it cannot bring happiness to a person. In fact, without money, it also troubles to deal with to cope with some serious illness problems. In this case, people cannot determine what is more crucial, money or other things.
On the other hand, money is something but not everything in daily life. Moreover, pleasant is considered an essential part of a person's life. Even if people value some things such as family or job conditions, they would be happy with a little amount of money. For instance, there are many little groups in Africa, which earn so little amount of money whilst working hard. Statistics show that they reckon themselves happy as a result of living surround their family.
To conclude, money is not the most important thing for happiness, while it can be found on other sides of our life, such as living through family or job satisfaction. I strongly believe that if people can identify what is happiness, life will be heaven for them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...nt is considered an essential part of a persons life. Even if people value some things ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in fact, in general, such as, as a result, it is true, what is more, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1175.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60784313725 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41746814853 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572549019608 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1166337826 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9285714286 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371806711985 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126281796181 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830559516239 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227594833119 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702958668461 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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