Most people believe that stricter punishments should be given for traffic offenses.
To what extent do you agree?
It is popularly believed that when people are penalized heavily for traffic offenses our roads will become safer. In my opinion, it is important to give stricter punishment to traffic offenders to ensure the safety of our roads and to reduce traffic congestion.
To begin, when people are penalized fully for the crimes they commit on the road, they become more attentive when driving and are likely to obey traffic rules and regulations. People often flout the laws that govern our road because some of the punishments given are not severe enough. Sometimes, people especially young people, disobey the rules and regulations on the road to satisfy their own desire at the expense of other people’s safety. Hence, having severe punishment for traffic offenders will increase people’s safety on the road and consequently reducing the rate of accidents. For instance, three years ago, a new policy was adopted in Ghana which ensures that people who caught driving under the influence of any substance like Alcohol, cannabis, cocaine and the likes, will be sentenced to a minimum of twenty years in imprisonment, this as subsequently decreased accidents on the streets of Ghana.
Secondly, another reason why harder punishment should be instituted in the laws for traffic offenders is that our roads will be less congested, If anyone is caught on the wrong side of the law, they should have their license seized for a number of years. This means we will continue to have a lesser number of vehicles on our roads. As a result, reducing the heavy congestion we experience especially for those of us living in metropolitan cities. Ind addition, a reduction in traffic congestion as a direct effect of stricter punishment will lead to less Co2 emissions. Thus, reducing the negative impact of excessive Co2 released into our environment. To exemplify this, North Korea implemented a law that allows road safety officials to ban a traffic offender or suspend their driving license. This has caused fewer cars to be seen on the road in North Korea.
To conclude, I would like to reiterate that harsher traffic laws and punishments will keep our street safe as well as reduce traffic congestion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...t the laws that govern our road because some of the punishments given are not severe enough...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09116022099 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73395963222 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53591160221 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.1083200009 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.866666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1333333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223696652249 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081754616433 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537203963594 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149044204679 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356046828432 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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