As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-being.
What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?
As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-being.
What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?
A vast majority of men and women spend a big part of their adult life at their workplace, satisfaction from one's employment is a crucial factor for an individual's well-being. This essay will discuss that a decent salary is the major contribution factor to bring a sense of satisfaction from work, however, the expectation of happiness from jobs for most workers is not met due to longer working hours.
A good income is a major source of contentment from one's work. That is to say, in this contemporary world, everyone works for money. Therefore, if they get good wages, they can not only battle financial woes but also fulfil their basic requirements. This makes their life comfortable and gives them a sense of satisfaction from the work they do. For example, a recent survey by The Job Magazine revealed that 80% of Google employees responded that handsome package is the biggest factor which makes them feel happy with their jobs.
However, when it comes to the expectation of all workers from their work, it is not realistic for the majority of them as they have to work for longer hours. That is to say, in many countries, due to an increased supply of labour, employees have to accept jobs with more work hours than normal shifts. Such working condition leads to physical and mental fatigue. As a consequence, they feel no satisfaction from their work. For example in India, in 2018, nearly 75% of factory workers in Verdhman industry went on strike because they were forced to work extra hours.
To conclude, a big part of adult life is spent on work by grown-ups and a significant element of one's well-being is satisfaction from one's job. Good earning is
the main source of pleasure from employment for employees, while not everyone's expectation from their job is realistic to make them satisfied.
- There are many reasons that can motivate a person to stay working for the same company. Some believe that money is the main reason.Do you agree or disagree? 73
- People naturally resist making changes in their lives.What kinds of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest? 67
- It is expected in the near future that there will be a higher proportion of old people compared to younger population in some countries. Is it a positive or negative development? Give your opinion and examples. 56
- In many countries senior positions have higher salaries compared to those of young workers of the same company. Some people think this isn’t justified. Do you agree or disagree? 67
- Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects,especially at the primary level.Do you agree or disagree? 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89428571429 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79467277483 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482857142857 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4896435315 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.764705882 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5882352941 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64705882353 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.565722661861 0.244688304435 231% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.220942156016 0.084324248473 262% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.196563070884 0.0667982634062 294% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.376930594844 0.151304729494 249% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.220945250718 0.056905535591 388% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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