Throughout history, jobs were an inevitable part of human life, accordingly, people spend almost half of their lives to working in order to gain more money and social prestige in communities.
Above all people start working at a young age to support their families and themselves. A young girl or boy, for example, after graduation from college and university looking forward to suitable jobs related to their educational degree that they have. Sometimes they find a job with lots of duty without a good salary and benefits so that they could not be happy with their job title. In addition families’ expectations is another factor for job enjoyment, a family achievement in a particular subject like medicine always wants to their children choose medical brunches as their features career.
Apart from people's and families' self-satisfaction, ambitious is the natural part of individual life. Obviously, people working hard to improve their lives. For instance, buying expensive houses, cars, jewelry, clothes, etc are the main reason for working so hard so that this desire play an important role in their lives.
Although the work situation or ambitious to live luxury are the reasons for most people to be satisfied with their job, for many people, there are many problems in their workplace or on their profession. As an illustration, many people have to work in some position that really does not like without a good salary, medical insurance or safety like simple workers in the minds and roads. Also, they work to provide minimum income money to living and paying their bills.
In conclusion, the work position, salary or people's interest in their job title could be important factors for their satisfaction, however, everybody can not find their dream job in society.
- Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age.Do you agree or disagree?Which types of work 67
- You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child.Write a letter to the parents. In your letter- Explain why you would like the job- Give details of why you wo 61
- Some people think that prison sentences should not be used in dealing with criminals. Education and job training should be used instead.To what extent do you agree on disagree? 89
- Some people argue that competitive sports are good for bringing together different people and cultures. Others argue that these sports can cause problems and increase conflicts between nations. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion. 67
- Some people think that zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However,other people think that zoos are useful to protect the rare animals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 389, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...d not be happy with their job title. In addition families' expectations is another ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, however, if, look, really, so, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1724137931 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72632823338 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.062462485 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32448881987 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12647178796 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535338278265 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196154124176 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316384061649 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.