In this people think that most of the news comes in the news paper are not real or should be objective instead of subjective.
In the newspaper all news are not fake but some news are also not true . Some news are only for the prediction of the people what people think about . This news are only a objective news . Also , I think that not all news are true in the newspaper. There are some many news which are not real or not true . Also , some newspaper can print the news only for the prediction.
The main function of the newspaper are to aware the people about your country or your city . But today some news are not real and people cannot aware the real news and sometimes people can misguided and misunderstand the whole news . So I think in newspapers all the news can printed real so that people can aware the real news .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
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Suggestion: .
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Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
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Suggestion: .
...on of the people what people think about . This news are only a objective news . A...
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...ple what people think about . This news are only a objective news . Also , I think ...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'objective news'.
Suggestion: objective news
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Suggestion: .
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...e true in the newspaper. There are some many news which are not real or not true . A...
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Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much news', 'a good deal of news'.
Suggestion: much news; a good deal of news
...e true in the newspaper. There are some many news which are not real or not true . Also ,...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
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Suggestion: ,
...ws which are not real or not true . Also , some newspaper can print the news only ...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e people about your country or your city . But today some news are not real and pe...
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Suggestion: .
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
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...l so that people can aware the real news .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 41.998997996 29% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 673.0 1615.20841683 42% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 155.0 315.596192385 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34193548387 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17315396506 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 60.0 176.041082164 34% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.387096774194 0.561755894193 69% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 211.5 506.74238477 42% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1245746858 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.3 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295158603188 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155582072598 0.084324248473 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117403656059 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275246399406 0.151304729494 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135310725354 0.056905535591 238% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 13.0946893788 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 12.4159519038 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.7 8.58950901804 66% => OK
difficult_words: 13.0 78.4519038076 17% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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