In this present era, everyone is doing hard work to fulfil his/her ambitions and goals to get the desired job. Therefore, civilization believes that the majority of young individuals change their jobs or careers every couple of years. In this, there are plenty of reasons behind this and de-merits outweigh the merits which I will discuss in the upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, there are certain reasons that youngsters change their jobs and careers like the majority of youngsters do not like the atmosphere of their workplace as they left their job and find the better place. Moreover, young people change their jobs or careers as they are certainly enthusiastic to explore new things in their life that's why they change their workplace every couple of years as they learn new things and meet new people in different places also they enhance their knowledge. In addition to this, sometimes adults change their work as they do not get fair compensation. For instance, in many multinational corporations, society works almost 10 to 12 hours a day but they do not get enough salary.
On the other hand, changing jobs or careers become more shortcomings than the benefits like when the youth change their work every few years this could lose their interests in any particular firm and this could lead to a lack of concentration in the work. Also, it would affect a bad impression on their resume while changing jobs again and again as they would become a negative appearance on the employee image. Moreover, changing jobs again and again sometimes have less interaction with their co-workers and is less familiar with the environment.
To conclude, it is important to enhance their knowledge and explore new places and meet new people. However, there has been a lot of drawbacks this could affect people resume.
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- Some are of the opinion that people are naturally born as good leaders while others feel that leadership skills can be learned Discuss both views and give your own opinion 93
- Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society Others however believe that school is the place to learn this Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
- Most people think that the truth should be objective rather than subjective when it comes to the news 56
- Some school leavers tend to go travelling or work for a period of time before going to university directly what do you think are the advantages and disadvantages 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00986842105 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5998061369 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516447368421 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.1863975341 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.916666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388549189042 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138351643809 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765851525061 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219950103952 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827776027023 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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