Few individuals believe that the exchange of information between employers and their workers is crucial for the success of a firm. Others, on contrary, perceive that other aspects like job satisfaction is rather vital. According to my opinion, although communication is quite necessary, other factors such as job satisfaction are equally important. This essay briefly analyses both the cases and in furtherance, provides reasons to justify my opinion.
To begin with, for any institution to triumph, the existence of communication is a basic necessity. This helps in identifying the prevailing flaws and possible alterations to be made to improve working conditions and efficiency. Consequently, the output will be amplified to a great extent, pushing the company to higher levels. For example, as a way of communication, almost every firm takes feedback from its employees regarding various components for better performance. In other words, it would establish an organized and efficient work environment.
On the other hand, factors like job satisfaction of the workers constitute the progression of any institution. As this generates a sense of loyalty in the employees, they would strive to put forth extra efforts and push their limits. Thus, it would not only improve individual performances, but also the output of the firm as a whole. As an illustration, many workplaces provide bonuses and perks to their employees in order to make them satisfied with their job. As a whole, the workers strive for the betterment of the organisation.
To conclude, communication is vital in any organization. Nevertheless, it is not the only factor contributing to success as other aspects like employee satisfaction are also crucial.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 388, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'takes'' or 'take's'?
Suggestion: takes'; take's
...way of communication, almost every firm takes feedback from its employees regarding v...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, consequently, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, thus, for example, such as, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45353159851 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24754330217 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587360594796 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.9491649124 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.6875 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8125 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.125 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159315838989 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527541067788 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533063958122 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107883297661 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573668056619 0.056905535591 101% => OK
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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