- It is true that post graduate students deserve higher income than their counterparts without university degree. While I accept this viewpoint, I completely disagree with the idea that they should be responsible for their university tuition fee. The reasons to support this point of view will be explained below.
There are two main reasons why university graduates get better salary in comparison with those who stop at lower education. First, students with university degree have to invest time and effort into gaining qualification. It is clear that every university requires four years for students to accomplish. In addtion, students have to be under a lot of study pressure to acquire knowlegde, skills and training that can meet the demand of the job market. Therefore, they can use their specialized knowledge when learning at university to solve the problems that normal people are not capable of. Understandably, high payments are appropriate to their efforts.
On the other hand, the opinition that tuition fee should be paid all by the students is not reasonable for some of the following reasons. First, Students who are away from home have to cope with money problems such as living expense, tuition fee. If they are forced to pay the full cost of their education, they would either be in a big debt after graduation or stop pursuing their accademic education due to being unable to pay for it. Moreover, those graduates will contribute to the country’s economy when they start to work by paying tax.
In conclusion, there are convincing arguments for the viewpoint that university graduates should earn more money than less well educated people. I am against that they should completely pay the cost of their study.
- The chart illustrates consumption of three kinds of fast food by teenagers in Mauritius from 1985 to 2015 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The charts below show the percentage of male and female workers in country A and country B Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The graph below shows how elderly people in the United States spent their free time between 1980 and 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words 73
- The maps below show the future plan about the Biology School in particular university 61
- The chart illustrates average CO2 emissions per person in four European countries between 1975 and 2015 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Line 4, column 215, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...completely pay the cost of their study.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11971830986 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72187540583 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602112676056 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2691309101 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296381261826 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937998183622 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861674575302 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205825444669 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104776714048 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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