The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about the consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates how much energy was consumed in the USA from 1980 to 2020 and is forecasted for the next 10 years.
What stands out from the graph is that Petrol and Oil are always consumed the most fuel over the 50 years, while other energies were not changed too much, except Coal and Natural Gas had a slight rise at the same time.
Looking at the graph for more detail, the number of Petro and Oil witnessed a minimal fluctuation in the first 15 years then it continued to grow up gradually and was evaluated that it will become the popular energy in the future. Whereas Coal was just begging with more than 15 units, however, as projections, that figure was higher than that at the first time approximately 2 times. To continue another feature, There was a fluctuation in the figure for Natural Gas from 1980 to 2015 but after that instead of going on with an increase, it will remain unchanged over the period of suggestion.
Turning to the other features, all 3 remaining energies started at less than 5 units then Nuclear and Solar/Wind had a progress change and they are calculated that they will make up 9 and 7 units in 2030. On the other hand, the number of Hydropower declined moderately and will become the lowest figure in the future.
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- The diagram below shows the process of making soft cheese Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, look, so, then, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1038.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55263157895 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41425756319 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.2838709294 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.285714286 112.824112599 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5714285714 22.9334400587 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.23603664747 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118813479218 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567241553732 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330862801666 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0779728158456 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241482923824 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.