Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there?
Many countries in the world rely on motorways for speedy and efficient transportation, as they are a very convenient way of travelling long distances. However, motorways also have negative aspects such as dangerous traffic, damage to the environment and pollution. In this essay, I will look at some of the problems of motorways and how they can be overcome.
One major problem of motorways is that they can be dangerous. In many countries, the speed limit on motorways is very high. This means that any accidents are more likely to be serious and involve many vehicles. Sometimes in bad weather, several vehicles crash into each other and many people are killed or injured. This problem could be solved in a number of ways. People could have special lessons on how to drive safely on motorways. In addition, special signs could be displayed when driving conditions are bad to make people drive more slowly and safely. Alternatively, the general speed limit could be reduced slightly.
Secondly, motorways can spoil the environment. Motorways often go through beautiful areas and may damage plants and wildlife. This problem could be avoided by building motorways through less beautiful areas or putting some sections in tunnels. In addition, the large amount of traffic on motorways produces both air pollution and noise pollution. However, governments could help to reduce air pollution by making environmentally-friendly cars cheaper. Noise pollution could be reduced by changing motorway surfaces or by putting up sound-proof fences.
Despite the problems of motorways, they are necessary and useful. With careful preparation and planning, the problems they cause could be reduced. People today are also more aware of environmental issues and as a result cars and road transport in general are becoming more environmentally friendly.
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Suggestion: some
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'in addition', 'in general', 'such as', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.252307692308 0.247107183377 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.153846153846 0.155533422707 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.107692307692 0.0946595960268 114% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0646153846154 0.0501214627716 129% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0184615384615 0.0437548338989 42% => OK
Prepositions: 0.116923076923 0.122226691241 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0492307692308 0.0403226058552 122% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.8521846555 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0153846153846 0.0326793684256 47% => More infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00307692307692 0.00163938923432 188% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0646153846154 0.0861772015684 75% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.04 0.021408717616 187% => Try to use less modal verbs (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.00923076923077 0.011925033212 77% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1843.0 1933.35771543 95% => OK
No of words: 292.0 316.048096192 92% => OK
Chars per words: 6.31164383562 6.12580529183 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.400684931507 0.374742101984 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.332191780822 0.28420135186 117% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.243150684932 0.203846283523 119% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.171232876712 0.137316102897 125% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8521846555 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.037074148 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551369863014 0.56093040696 98% => OK
Word variations: 56.9199767622 60.7387585426 94% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0891783567 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.6 20.7743622355 70% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4955505119 49.517814964 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.15 127.492653851 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6 20.7743622355 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.814263465372 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 47.8191780822 49.1944974215 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.76623376623 1.69124875643 104% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355635598912 0.332605444948 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.11859055664 0.102741220458 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0919479744092 0.0668466124924 138% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.461478737766 0.534860350844 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.116872712988 0.148594505496 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13139543133 0.134430193775 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0987119517168 0.0742795772207 133% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.264462717236 0.324371583561 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0565057496713 0.0638462369009 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272523812295 0.228012699653 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113745764931 0.058150111329 196% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 8.0 2.5751503006 311% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 10.4468937876 163% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 7.0 Out of 9