Developing highways helped our society travel faster and more efficient, however, this modern trend of transportation cause many problems. This essay will outline and discuss some of them and their negative impact to our modern society.
Firstly, motorways have been built to increase speed and cut time of travel from point A to point B. Average speed on motorway is 110 km per hour, however, in Germany, some most of builded freeways are unlimited in speed. Driving in high speed is enormously dangerous, especially for young and eldery drivers. Their cognitive functions are poor and in statistics mostly these drivers cause serious motor vehicle accidents with several consequences. In contrast, young drivers, more likely speeding and in high speed making mistake, but, eldery drivers are over conscious and likely over fear. Speeding in highways cost many lives and destroy many families. If crash is not fatal, serious injuries can put aside till that time economically productive individual.
Secondly, motorways are poison for our environment. As fast is car moving as more pollutions are exposed into the air. This alert have been recently presented to German government, when many studies proved higher percentage of pollution than around regular road. German government react to this situation with implementing new law to reduce speed in majority unlimited speed motorways to speed limit of 130 kilometres per hour, when average speed measured by highway patrol was 180 kilometres per hour. Ecological institutions and local councils believe, that speed reduction helps to return fauna and flora back where it came from.
To sum up, highways as much made our daily routine easier and boosted economic, its impact to our modern society is significant. Safety and ecological awareness must go first despite advantages we getting from this modern development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, in contrast, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39249146758 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66083368081 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648464163823 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6756938286 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.75 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3125 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0804398324288 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0288006646689 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401266064699 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0479616964548 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293080504611 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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