The movement of people from the countryside into the cities is happening in many parts of the world, resulting in the problems, especially in cities.
What are the causes of this movement, and how can it be reversed
It is irrefutable that in this ultramodern era, the urbanization has been snowballing in the across the globe. The migrate is being surged among innumerable peoples from rural area to urban area in the every nations. This essay will analyze of root-causes of the moment and also solutions in following the paragraphs
To commence, discussing the reasons behind the moving in the city, the first and foremost one is, the less opportunity of job and business as people cannot fulfill requirement of their family due to which they need be moved in the metro city. As a ramification, they will establish their whether job or business. Furthermore, there are neglect primary facilities in the villages. The development of the health care, education, transportation and even communication amenities are less in the rural area. As a consequence, for any medical as well as for pursuing further study because of that people are migrating. For instance, as per the TIME OF INDIA report, 60% of population is living in the city as compared to last three decades.
Examining the measures of the migration, to begin with, the new development should be occurred by the government such as enhance not only education, health care, but also businesses and job opportunities in the county sides by people of villages would not plan to shift in the metropolitan city. Moreover, the law enforcement authority should encourage to entrepreneurs for investing money and businessman expand their business on the rural areas. Therefore, the ratio of the unemployment would dwindling and several individuals would get job.
In the final analysis, the reflection exhibited to above statement leads to assert that the authority should understand the gravity of the situation regarding the basis needs of the countryside people, if they will act judiciously towards this issues then number of problem would create in the years to come
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...re, the ratio of the unemployment would dwindling and several individuals would get job. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, as for, for instance, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20064724919 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98318338748 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595469255663 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.2164691312 49.4020404114 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.916666667 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5833333333 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.08877721132 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0270099941467 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277315142974 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0545060477939 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330115162162 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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