Museums and art galleries
In recent years, the great progress of information technology can allow people to obserse artworks or historical objects through computer. Therefore, some persons think that it is unessential to remain the existence of museums or exhibitions. I totally disagree with this idea.
In my opinion, seeing pictures of the works of art or historical objects through personal computer, laptop or any electronic devices can not bring any value for observers. In order to understand deeply the historical and artistic meaning of them, we also need to reach a comprehensive feeling about all aspects of these works such as: real colour, materials, scale and overall apperance which is only provided by museums or art galleries. Besides, while computer just supply a kind of one-way communation for observers, public museums or art expositions can bring a golden and ideal environment where visitors can meet and broaden their relationship with other ones, reach the deep interaction and discussion with staffs to boost their interest in history or art.
In technological perspective, using computers also brings many undeniable benefits in discovering the hidden meaning of artworks or historical objects such as: plentiful information, convenient approach and low expense. However, the electronic devices can just be means which support museums or exhibitions to accomplish their missions and are never impossible to replace them. It is because museums are a place where not only stores historical value objects but also represents many unique features of that nation’s cuture. Moreover, keeping these destinations can benefit significantly to the tourism industry of that country by attracting more and more tourists.
In conclusion, I do not believe that public museums and art exhibitions can be alternated by computers which people can use to see artworks.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51048951049 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00198802859 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597902097902 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.8043177257 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.272727273 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191567951284 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714049281409 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616824074844 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122494013659 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592317092874 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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