Music, nowadays, plays a vital role in our daily life. Many people state that music only has advantages, while, others argue that music can negatively affect individuals and societies. However, I firmly believe that music has its both advantages and disadvantages, but the drawbacks are outweighed by the benefits.
On the one hand, music has some negative effect on our societies. To be more specific, it is undeniable that music can manipulate people's thoughts and emotion. For example,when people listen to sad songs, it is likely that they will feel extremely upset afterwards. Therefore, there are songs that were banned in Vietnamese wars because they might affect soldiers' determination to fight. Moreover, there are many songs that have sensitive contents, but are not strictly prohibited, so these songs can go viral and have a bad impact on children's development.
Notwithstanding, the drawbacks of music are minor compared to its benefits. In other words, music has been a crucial part of our lives, people listen to music regardless of time. Listening to music has become a hobby for many people as it brings them relaxation and entertainment after long hours of work. Additionally,music can boost up people's energy and and make the feel happy. For instance, if you are not feeling like to do your morning exercises, dance music can cheer you up and make you move your body, and definitely, it is a great way to start an energetic day. Furthermore, music is important to every culture and listening to traditional music helps a nation to preserve its culture.
In conclusion, music has more advantages than disadvantages. However, people should be careful not to be controlled by music and the government also has to censor all the songs thoroughly before making them public.
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- Music is played in every society and culture in the world today.Some people think that music brings only benefits to individuals and societies. Others, however, think that music can have a negative influence on both.Discuss both these views and give your 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13310580205 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96769405511 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58361774744 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3305931992 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3125 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356253920266 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120518940181 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070265492184 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220184389564 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833721386884 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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