Music is played in every society and culture in the world today.
Some people think that music brings only benefits to individuals and societies. Others, however, think that music can have a negative influence on both.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Music has been playing a vital role in society and culture in many countries around the world. I strongly believe that pure music is always pleasing and brings benefits to both individuals and social lives. People are much addicted to music than ever before because of increasing stress in life. As such, it is believed that music benefits individuals and societies while some think just the opposite. Both views are of equal importance and shall be considered.
To begin with, listening to music brings benefits to individuals in several ways. Among many, one major advantage is, it helps individual to relax and freshen their mind after hectic schedule in modern era. Moreover, possibly music is the only form of art that we can feel so deeply and need in every part of our personal and social life. Music is related to our relaxation, our festival, our national pride, prayer, daily activities, joys, celebration as well as many important aspects. National songs, for instance helps to promote the value of a society and their tradition.
Some people, on the other hand, think that music can have a negative influence. This is true especially in current life, where music is listened and played loud as a fashion icon or only to show off the modernity in regards to music. Furthermore, most notable is music these days is explicit and aggressive. They are based on crime, war and aggression rather than peace, care and love which are degrading the social values and the real value of music. Many teenagers, for instance, prefer listening to explicit music than love songs.
In conclusion, it cannot be denied that music have benefited individuals and societies in many different ways. Therefore, we should cultivate our young generation to understand the real music's merits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Line 5, column 214, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
... icon or only to show off the modernity in regards to music. Furthermore, most notable is mus...
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Line 7, column 91, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... benefited individuals and societies in many different ways. Therefore, we should cultivate ou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03716216216 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57127887889 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1619518131 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.7058823529 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4117647059 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411138270781 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132790269849 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745099010104 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247656706574 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0879374254251 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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