MzwcoIn the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What
problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some
measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing
populations.
As countries in the world impulsing day by day, the average life expectancy is rising as well. There are a plethora of problems might be anticipated behind this situation , hence , actions should be taken immediately. This essay explores the problems as well as solutions which are associated with this ominous trend.
Ageing will sow numerous problems for both individuals and society . It will induce tumult in pension system and put hardles to mobilizing the fiscal. Because, ageing will proliferate the number of people who are eligible to receive pension and stokes the fallout in the amount of working adults. Following that , the sum of tax money that government receives from citizens will be plunged down. As a result , the state will be left with a legacy of economic recession and become embattt with problems in terms of optimisation of budget resources.
Therefore , tackles intended to mitigate this potential problems should be carried out as much as faster. First solution would be increasing the pension age to crudely 65-70 years. Because , nowadays the old are not geriatric , they are legitimate and quite vigorous to work well. Second action to reduce the risk level of these problems is that promoting the immigration in order to enlarge the scope of taxpayers. Authorities should make a frantic attempt to attend more people for immigrating. As a consequence , countries will achieve a quantum leapt in the amount of taxpayers and minimization of danger levels of ageing.
In conclusion , there are numerous ways of overwhelming this issue, therefore actions should be taken immediately in order achieving high efficacy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, second, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27099236641 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81455134725 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610687022901 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8910559274 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.0666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276135788218 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842044260292 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611840768684 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150711338204 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048653560294 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.