In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.
In this day and age, there is a considerable increase in the age of people. From my perspective, it extremely affects the government and the public and possibly will be recommended in the following essay.
On the one hand, it exists several obvious issues to rise in the number of people living longer. Firstly, the government budget will be deficit significantly to pay the pension. The government budget comes mostly from tax, which takes in a piece of the worker income. However, the proportion of younger, working adults will be smaller, who are paying the tax, than the elderly resident receiving the pension. Additionally, living longer due to several health problems. The state has special policy for the elderly population. They are checked up health without payment, which leads to waste of facilities and staff. For example, the report of Bach Mai hospital shows that the number of population aging accounts to 40% of patients in their hospital.
In order to address the aforementioned issues, a variety of actions can be taken. The first measure is changing the retirement policy such as adding more time working, considering the pension. To illustrate, in Vietnam, the government has changed the time of retirement from 60 to 65 for men and from 55 to 60 for women, which helps them reduce the budget deficit. Another efficacious way is having a new rule in the medical field. The state should require the old cohorts to pay a fee for each stay at the hospital and should check up their health once or twice per year.
In conclusion, living longer can be ascribed to main reasons which are the effect of the government budget and waste of facilities and staff, and this issue can be dealt with by changing some policies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87162162162 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66790949094 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564189189189 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2775041897 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.125 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155215114323 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481522478852 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454456626423 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101614831211 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302974848721 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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