New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
technology is coming the most important think in our lives , we use it in many domain such as banks , enterprises , pay and receive income more over we use it in education , however, most children use computer in games , studies, watch movies
on other hand beside the many feature of technology such as time reduction , get information from any where at anytime, know more people though social site and practice many culture
technology cause that children become unfriendly in their real lives and relation ship , they stay hours behind the computer , talk with their friend from other country , other culture moreover technology may cause many ill
in my opinion , children must know technology well because it is the future but do not stay beside the computer skills for a long time , they have to organize their time between computer and doing other thing such as reading , playing sport , watch television , go out with their family and make friend with their relative
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, may, moreover, so, well, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 808.0 1615.20841683 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 160.0 315.596192385 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4356156395 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64375 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 160.0 20.2975951904 788% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 808.0 106.682146367 757% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 160.0 20.7667163134 770% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 61.0 7.06120827912 864% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191338772543 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191338772543 0.084324248473 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111219168388 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707860348578 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 82.4 13.0946893788 629% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -90.92 50.2224549098 -181% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 65.7 11.3001002004 581% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.19 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.74 8.58950901804 160% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 78.4519038076 28% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 9.78957915832 582% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 66.0 10.1190380762 652% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 66.0 10.7795591182 612% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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