In some countries, the criminal trials are shown on the TV and the general public can watch them. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is undoubtedly the case that whether the criminal trials should be shown on TV or not has became a controversial topic. My view is that there are more benefits than drawbacks and in this essay I will explain why.
The first point to make is that there are some downsides to showing criminal trials on TV, but these are relatively minor. The most significant of the disadvantages is that it can probably lead to a lot of imitation of crime. For instance, when watching live criminal trials on TV, many details of criminal offenses such as killing, embezzling and cheating would be presented, which may lead to involuntary imitation and became a promotion of these crimes. Typically, however, this is only actions of a few men and does not seriously threaten national security.
When we turn to other side of the argument, there are two major points to make in favor of this action. The first of these is that TV trails could bring down the crime rate. For example, people may be fearful of their faces shown on TV after they committed crimes because it is generally considered to be a disgrace to his or her family and community, so that they may require serious thought before they commit offences. Meanwhile, aware that they are watched by the general public, the lawyer and judges may have to make sure that the law is followed strictly, and justice is done to the highest standards.
In conclusion, I understand the point of view of people who worry about showing criminal trials on TV because it is a treat to criminals’ privacy. However, this is outweighed by its positive impact on reducing crime rate and the fact that it contributes to impartial trails.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 94, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...trials should be shown on TV or not has became a controversial topic. My view is that ...
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Line 9, column 469, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ile, aware that they are watched by the general public, the lawyer and judges may have to make...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78082191781 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68319022023 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565068493151 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2329132732 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.333333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246186749842 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806744959435 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06352948749 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138815795682 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374534969576 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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