do you agree or disgree with money is very important when choosing a job

Grammar and spelling errors:
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during my final year in my college , i started...
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during my final year in my college , i started to think about factor that i ...
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during my final year in my college , i started to think about factor that i ha...
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... that i have to take in applying for job , i mentioned company type , nationality ...
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...at i have to take in applying for job , i mentioned company type , nationality , ...
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...lying for job , i mentioned company type , nationality , location , job position ,...
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... , nationality , location , job position , and salary many people view that sal...
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... nationality , location , job position , and salary many people view that salar...
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... , location , job position , and salary many people view that salary is importan...
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...s important when their apply for job.it help them to buy every things needed , get w...
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....it help them to buy every things needed , get well education to their children , ...
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...d , get well education to their children , go on holiday every where and save up f...
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...ation to their children , go on holiday every where and save up from this money in contrac...
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...and save up from this money in contract to this views , other believe to get an ...
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...ave up from this money in contract to this views , other believe to get an enjoyab...
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...m this money in contract to this views , other believe to get an enjoyable job s...
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...et an enjoyable job such as job position , and company type and location are more ...
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...rtant than well paid salary further more , they prefer to work with manager patie...
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...alary further more , they prefer to work with manager patient, have good relation...
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...lationship with college to well paid job in my opinion, people have to make equiv...
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...nd other factors when they apply for job
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
well, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 15.1003584229 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 52.1666666667 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 629.0 1977.66487455 32% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 132.0 407.700716846 32% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76515151515 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38956122427 4.48103885553 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35667448258 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 212.727598566 38% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 201.6 618.680645161 33% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 132.0 20.1344086022 656% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 629.0 100.406767564 626% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 132.0 20.6045352989 641% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 28.0 5.45110844103 514% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.5376344086 415% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17271216175 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17271216175 0.076458572812 226% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103372347865 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324244093213 0.0645574589148 50% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 67.0 11.7677419355 569% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -54.04 58.1214874552 -93% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 53.6 10.1575268817 528% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.57 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.7 8.01818996416 158% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 86.8835125448 24% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 10.002688172 530% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 54.8 10.0537634409 545% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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