New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
In about 250 words, write an essay to express your opinion on the issue. Use reasons and examples to support your composition.
It is obvious that in the modern world, children’s recreational activities have been changed with the inventions of technology devices. Personally, I think that its drawbacks outweigh its benefits on this side.
Firstly, spending more time relaxing with technology means that they do not have time for outdoor activities. This does not have any positive effects on them at all as they may be inactive and lead a sedentary life. Consequently, they do not get enough physical exercise and activities, which may make them come down with some diseases such as obesity. Moreover, as they are glued to those gadgets’ screens all the time, their eyes can be hurt.
Secondly, using technological devices too much can negatively affect their way of life, especially their studies. Many games now, which kids almost find whenever they hold a smartphone or turn on a computer, are designed to be addictive. So, children, who may not have enough discipline to avoid those, may find it difficult to get away from devices. Therefore, they may not concentrate on their studies at school, and their academic results can be reduced rapidly. From a different perspective, this situation is detrimental to the following generations and our society in general.
To sum up, I believe that in the field of recreation, modern gadgets like smartphones and tablets are not beneficial to children for several reasons mentioned above. I hope there will be a better alternative to this kind of entertainment in children’s spare time soon.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, i think, in general, kind of, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18623481781 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9309559943 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643724696356 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.3455647874 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.5384615385 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174112922519 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619136975947 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417605109758 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1038990468 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0128267998774 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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