Recent explosion of new technologies and trends have affected people's lives in every aspect, and it has dramatically changed the way youngsters spend their free time now a days. This essay discusses why I am inclined with the fact that disadvantages of this phenomenon outweigh advantages.
There are two main disadvantages associated with young people using new technologies to spend their free time. Firstly, it has increased the trend of having sedentary life styles in younger generation which often lead to prevalent health problems such as obesity and diabetes. In the past, children used to spend a lot of time outdoors engaging physically demanding activities with colleagues, however, at present they often tend to stay indoors and spend time with computers, phone or tablets. Secondly, teenagers often tend to prefer to make connections and spend a lot of time with online friends rather than with people who are physically present such as family members or colleagues. This trend often leads to poor relationships with those who are in immediate circle, which, in turn may lead to poor quality of their personal lives.
On the other hand, there are also some advantages of youngsters utilizing new technologies to spend their free time. New technologies have enabled many interesting hobbies which would be not possible otherwise, such as drone photography. Now a days there are sophisticated technologies built in to drones and cameras so that it has become far more easier to learn and start such an interesting activity. If someone develops the skill well, it is also possible to earn a good extra income as well.
In conclusion, though new technologies have brought some advantages with respect to how young people spend their leisure time, there are demerits such as increased health problems and decreased quality of personal relationships. It is, therefore, recommended to use new new technologies wisely in a way that they do not bring negative aspects to our lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21495327103 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89960707655 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560747663551 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7328783586 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.769230769 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.438877024021 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152381708744 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117242031342 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277449585735 0.151304729494 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084524748649 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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