New technologies provided machines which replaced workers to do certain physical jobs and tasks.
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Today’s industrialised world, almost every part of life is changing seriously. One of the biggest change is that the robotic machines are taking more time in the production process rather than humans. This essay will examine the positive and negative effects of this argument and provide my overall opinion.
From an overall perspective there are two key advantages of the technological manufacturing process. This can decrease the cost of producing and increase the time efficient. Nowadays, in many production processes , the companies are using robotic machines is because this method offers them to manufacture any products more cost effectively and takes less production time. Therefore, these companies earn more money. A good illustration of this is that this method allows companies to produced more products with taking less time rather than the human powered methods, so these companies make more many in shorter time.Secondly, producers have obligations to customers on maintaining the quality of their products. These machines provide a significant opportunity in error-free and all-time-standard in quality production process. In human involved processes, there are always reasons that cause the production errors. This may results the decrease of income profits because of the waste products which are produced with errors.
There are also variety of disadvantages of this production method. Perhaps the main drawback is that it may cause that workers will lose their jobs. If the all manufacturing processes were automated, there would be no reason the human power for them. Therefore, many people might be removed from the jobs and they will probably not be able to afford their needs.
In conclusion, it must be said that the machine powered production has more advantages in overall. Whereas, the impacts on people’s life have crucial importance and should be considered. If we can find a balance between these two methods, it will both be beneficial for the economies and individuals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 213, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
.... Nowadays, in many production processes , the companies are using robotic machine...
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Line 5, column 620, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Secondly
...ompanies make more many in shorter time.Secondly, producers have obligations to customer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, in conclusion, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51923076923 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98477800749 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544871794872 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.5148354483 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0695286880843 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0264967610682 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285284502357 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0439247702962 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00532063667822 0.056905535591 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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