News coverage about violent crimes frightens people and encourages criminals. Therefore, some believe that this type of news should not be reported in newspapers or shown on TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that press reporting of violence could scare people and motivate similiar criminal behaviors. I partly agree with the statement and believe that there are greater benefits associated with this movement.
It is understadable why some people advocate to the ban of ciminal act appearance on media. The first rationale is that bloody and cruel criminal scenes could terrify spectators then traumatize them deeply. This is specially true of crimes resulting in death and fighting cases. An additional point is that unscrupulous and devious acts could be stimulated by images or videos that present the procedure of breaking laws.
However, contrary to popular belief that presentation of crimes would discourage potential criminal acts and raise awareness of the public. This is deeply rooted in the fact that people have tendency to avoid repetition of scenarios that they perceive as fallacy and against humanity. Similarly, illustration of crimes's implementation and subsequent punishments would be of great importance which help educate young minds about self-dicipline and the negative consequences may follow. Besides, by providing truest and most cruel insight of reality, media respondents are displaying the highest quality of reporters which is fundamental element in the sector. Thus, maintaining trustfulness of society and make the world a better place.
In the light of these facts, violent evidence may have negative impacts on cartain individuals. However, it holds the key for maintaince of low crime-rate and education of young generation.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2022-08-01 | Charles Le | 84 | view |
| 2022-08-01 | Charles Le | 56 | view |
- Some people say that increasing fuel costs could reduce environmental problems do you agree or disagree 89
- Many students around the world don t choose science subjects at university Give the reasons for this and describe the impact on the community 89
- Some people say team sports football have lots of benefits Others say Individual sports swimming tennis are better Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Parents should encourage children to spend less time studying and more time doing physical activities To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, may, similarly, so, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5690376569 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9524039584 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.669456066946 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5563518955 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.384615385 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3846153846 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152644979998 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045732442549 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0262131526539 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084612745102 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312399199788 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.61 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.