Not many people use a bicycle although it has many benefits. Why? How to encourage people to use bicycles as a main transport?
In recent years, bicycles have gained less popularity than any other modes of transport. There are several reasons for this trend and some effective measures could be adopted to encourage people using bicycles more in my essay.
There are a couple of reason to explain why people do not use bicycles on their daily basis. One reason is that using bike is ineffective. This is because when people travel long distances in case of emergency or in extreme weather conditions, using other means of transport such as motorbike, private car, and bus is more convenient and not physically demanding like bike. Another reason is that riding bicycles, people might be able to face with a sense of fear and unsafe because in most developing countries, there are no private lanes for cyclists. As a result, in Vietnam, there is an increasingly unpredictable number of accidents happened by using bike.
Therefore, some practical solutions are suggested to encourage people to use bicycles as a main transport. Firstly, anyone can build up their fitness, beginning with practising to use a bike for short journeys to school, to work or to the shops. Secondly, the government should construct private lanes for only bike riders so this not only guarantees the safety of cyclists but also increases their speed of movement. Thirdly, the local authorities should launch more campaigns in school and in the neighborhoods, aimed at raise people awareness of the advantages of riding a bike, for instance improving health benefits and keep the body in shape. This is expected to encourage people to travel more by bike in the future.
In conclusion, I have presented some reasons why bicycles are becoming less common in today’s world and put forward some measures to encourage people to use this environmentally friendly means of transport for the above mentioned arguments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 122, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ily basis. One reason is that using bike is ineffective. This is because when peo...
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Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'main transport'.
Suggestion: main transport
... to encourage people to use bicycles as a main transport. Firstly, anyone can build up their fit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19016393443 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80459177376 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560655737705 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5334939838 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.769230769 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322221236507 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138191110618 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110514319581 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220486622668 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176186958249 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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