Nowadays, animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animal suffer, while others are in favour of the because of their benefits to humanity
Recently, the question of whether animals should be tested in experimentation to develop medicine and products or it should be prohibited has heated a debate. From my point of view, i am favour of preventing animal’s use in laboratory.
On the one hand, animal testing is essential in studying, especially in medication for some reasons. First, animal share genetic similarities with human. Therefore, by testing on animal, scientists could eradicate undesirable effects and make changes to medicines before it becomes mass-produced as well as being given to humans. Second, animal are able to produce huge population in a short period of time. For example, according recent studies, it is said that rats could give birth of up to two thousand babies every year which are quickly grown so that animal can provide a wide variety of population contributing to experiments.
On the other hand, animal experiments ought to to be ceased due to some causes behind. First and foremost, it is unjustifiable to cause animal to suffer. Admittedly, animal has rights to live and acts have been enacted to protect them. In addition, advancement in technology would replace animal in laboratory. Currently, some computer-modeling techniques has been examined by scientists with successful outcomes. Moreover, it is more time-saving and cost-effective than the use of animal in research.
In conclusion, despite of some merits above, it seem to me that animal pains outweigh benefits to humans. It is high time effective alternative methods are embraced.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: whether; the question whether
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33606557377 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14168683733 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651639344262 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.3014278638 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2666666667 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310825507333 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973012919186 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758327842219 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175779072893 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823222049378 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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