1. Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Recently, animals experiments have raised a controversial issue. While some people believe that animals should be used to test new medicines, others argue that it is unethical and must be banned. From my point of view, animals testing is against morality because of cruelty as well as extinction.
On the one hand, animals can be used to test new drug because they share genetic similarities to humans. When scientists develop a new vaccine, they need to study how the host body reacts to the new drug. Therefore, they may use animals like monkeys because of their genetic relatedness. If it is unsuccessful, they can gain experience and try another drug. In addition, animals testing can replace the human volunteers in experiments. Although many people are volunteer to join in experiments, the quantity is few. This can limit the research population and lead to wrong result. Thus, animal testing is advantageous because of gene similarities and huge population.
On the other hand, animals testing is extremely cruel. In fact, animals are usually objected with the diseases before being taken to the laboratory. Afterwards, they will be given the new drug to test their body reaction. As a result, some animals die at the end of the research or euthanized to avoid the later pain and distress. Another point to mention is that animals testing is money-consuming. Undoubtedly, scientists may not only need one but also millions animals to examine a new drug. Consequently, they have to pay millions dollar which is equivalent to the number of animals. In short, animals testing is cruel and wasteful.
In conclusion, animals experimentation is still a controversial debate. From my viewpoint, using animals in laboratory is unethical and money-consuming.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in short, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20070422535 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05226857983 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545774647887 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.1625106408 49.4020404114 39% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.3333333333 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5238095238 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.80952380952 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372401224622 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113134176301 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798227962387 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243923081233 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111034280898 0.056905535591 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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