Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about whether the practice using animals for testing purposes should be prohibited. Although animals in experiments could suffer pain or improper treatment, they are still necessary for the invention of many medications.
There are some reasons why animal testing should be banned. Animals used for experimental purposes are subjected to force-feeding, food, or water deprivation in order to have the condition in which new drugs can be tested. More cruelly, some laboratories which do not conform to animal rights treat inhumanely and lead to unnecessary deaths. Furthermore, medications tested by animals do not necessarily yield relevant results as human bodies are somewhat different from animal ones. For example, in some cases, drugs tested on birds cannot be used for human beings since human bodies have some distinct features that birds do not have.
However, there are compulsory arguments that proponents of animal experiments can have. Animal testing contributes enormously to the medical and scientific fields, and there is no adequate alternative. Animal testing determines the toxicity as well as the effectiveness of medications, hence resulting in many medical breakthroughs. In the past, many life-saving treatments and cures were invented thanks to animal experimentation. Besides, there have been strict regulations to prevent the mistreatment of animals in laboratories in recent decades. For example, there are methods that can avoid animals experiencing pain in laboratories but still achieve positive results.
In conclusion, while experiments using animals may be inhumane in some cases and maybe ineffective, there are medical treatments that must be tested on animals before being published.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, still, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76923076923 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05323574601 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565384615385 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2624573776 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.142857143 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289211100696 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117363212704 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643006638019 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208736138613 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410079995238 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.9 11.3001002004 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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