Nowadays animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in the sea. What are the reasons? What solutions to sovle the issue?
It is true that in recent years, because of human activities, there is an alarming increase in the loss of rare animal species. There are numerous reasons for this phenomenon, and several solutions should be proposed to deal with the problem.
There are many reasons why the increase in endangered animals number is due to human activities. On land, the desforestation is on the rise to make room for more living space, which is mainly because of the increasing population. Therefore, many animals whose habitat is forest are at risk of extinction due to habitat destruction. With marine ecosystem, toxic sewage is discharged directly from manufacturing plants or households into the sea, so water pollution is inevitable. For example, Formosa, a steel producing company, released liquid waste into the sea in the centre of Vietnam in the past, leading to massive deaths of fishes.
Some effective measures need to be taken to increase animal preservation. Firstly, the government can impose more severe punishments for any harmful activities to forests, which is home for many animals on land. If a heavy fine or even prison sentence is applied for devastating behaviors such as deforesting, the life of many endangered animals will be conserved. Secondly, they should invest more money in upgrading pollution treatment system to clean sewage before dumping it into rivers or oceans. Finally, from an educational standpoint, school subjects like biology should be taught and learnt following a more humane approach, which would need to focus on developing students' love and respect for animals in the broadest sense of the term, taking the importance of mutualism account.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons for the extinction of many rare animal species, urgent measures need to be taken to tackle this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 601, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to follow'.
Suggestion: to follow
...ike biology should be taught and learnt following a more humane approach, which would nee...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23986486486 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8172009451 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587837837838 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.436588994 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.307692308 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162255383832 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622577557532 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446064227398 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105463875147 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026880575761 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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