Health problems caused by excessive consumption of meat have assumed epidemic proportion all over the world.However,some folks uphold the notion, people ought to eat vegetarian diet rather than meat to maintain a healthy lifestyle.The idea does seems modern and I completely accord with the given statement.
To embark on,vegetarianism can provide a healthy diet of nutrition and fulfill our body needs accordingly.Moreover,vegetable may offer huge amount of fibers with low fat.Hence,this tendency would reduce the chances of chronic illness like obesity, heart disease and many more.A survey conducted by times of India revealed, 75 percent of vegetarian people are more healthier than those who are having meat in their meals.
Furthermore,our body needs four types of nutrition-fat ,vitamins,carbohydrates and minerals, which we can easily get from vegetables, fruits and nuts.In addition, people can take protein as well from vegetables.To exemplify- broccoli contains high protein which may help to complete the protein intake for our body instead of meat.
On the other hand, meat also have some benefits which are highly appreciable as it provide us protein and calcium.On the top of it,meat always help to recover the patients from several diseases and increase the muscles through out the whole body.According to the researchers, people must have around 100 grams of meat every day in their meals to become fit and healthy civilian.
After contemplating the subjected matter, I can conclude the vision that people must eat vegetables and fruits to get rid of several diseases and try to avoid meat as much as they can to become a healthy civilian for the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41064638783 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.45630931896 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634980988593 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 20.2975951904 256% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.2147222642 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 284.6 106.682146367 267% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.6 20.7667163134 253% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.4 7.06120827912 303% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192432433498 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108056083266 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402065348931 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108056083266 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402065348931 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.4 13.0946893788 232% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 10.24 50.2224549098 20% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.8 11.3001002004 219% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.99 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.96 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.1190380762 225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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