Nowadays children are consuming too many sugar-based drinks.
What are solutions to this situation?
By nature, any kid is appealed by sweet and sugary eats and this has always been the case. Yet, the current soaring trend in the number of beverages containing high levels of sugar inside available on the market has turned our children into ones who consume them in immense amounts. On the long run this eating habit of theirs will surely cause detriments to their well-being and this essay will put a emphasis on the outstanding two measurements to turn this tendency downwards.
Parents play on enormous role in the forming of any behaviour in children and choices of drinks are not an exception here either. A father and mother are obliged to rethink what message they are sending to their offsprings when they showing off a coke and a pepsi in their hands to the young one and cut down on the amounts they take in at the first place. This way children would not easily take after them. Instead, an exemplary preference of parents such as tea or simply mineral water would lead to the young people's developing a positive drinking habit.
Youngster are easily taken in by the force advertising and thus they are exposed to todays highly persuasive, sly product publicity methods. Profit-craving greedy drink manufactures all too often take advantage of this and target children with children oriented media and billboards in sites frequenlt visited by them. We have to open our eyes to this obvious fact and put an end or at least a certain limit to this previleges on this ought to be given to companies which are sensible about it and produce sugar free products.
Evidently, ensuring our young ones to be attracted to eat less sugar-containing drinks has to be achieved by means of focal attention to the main factors contributing to it. Parents and responsible authorities had better take the situation into their hands.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 401, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...heir well-being and this essay will put a emphasis on the outstanding two measure...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, thus, well, as to, at least, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84713375796 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64246014971 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617834394904 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.0416499867 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.833333333 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182946393953 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613449374106 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442645358957 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102205364183 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426057147731 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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