Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better time to be alive than now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern over the development of several fields of community. During the last century, this has revolutionized the path people live simultaneously with delaying the black day. That’s why, present is the best period to live in. From my aspects of illustration, many innovations can be seen in our daily basis from a simple to complex tools as it eases individuals’ life. The effect of science and technology on society will be discussed below before a reasonable conclusion is drawn.
On the one hand, evolution created opportunities for a better life. In terms of transportation, getting somewhere is evolved and became very convenient due to the introduced updated means of transport. In addition, the latest methods of treatment are established in medicine and this aspect made great contribution to length of life expectancy. For example, mass of comforts is created for disabled people in most of developed countries. Therefore, new chances provide citizens with suitable condition for being alive.
However, this tendency has some drawbacks. In spite of it has altered people’s life, the negative side might occur in the near future. For instance, individuals are living longer than in the past, whereas, the global sources and resources, especially, land are limited for exact quantity of people. Moreover, the issues such as deforestation, scarce of water are forecasted to appear. Thus, disadvantages should be overcome in the future.
To conclude, despite the occurrence of some problems, the opportunities that are established by science and other areas of evolution made the greatest impact to human life. Furthermore, these aspects are not the only edge of development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 421, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'overcome'?
Suggestion: overcome
...o appear. Thus, disadvantages should be overcome in the future. To conclude, despite ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47407407407 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16454119702 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659259259259 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5013368752 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9411764706 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8823529412 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70588235294 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120291373962 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0340686255838 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376295636191 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0671481923732 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329220123732 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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