Nowadays children pend a lot of time using the internet
Since the computers have appeared, youngsters are likely to spend more time into World Wide Web than as it was years ago, outside with friends. This essay will take a closer look at the two main problems being addicted of using the cyberspace and health/mentally issues that have led to this situation.
Health and mentally problem occurred by using too much internet. First, by using too much PC, tablets, phones and etc. could lead to number of problems such as eyes sight or difficulties of hearing. Second, the problems are not finishing here, for example; if a young one is closing himself constantly for a bit amount of time at home and just using the Internet might lead to a several numbers of problems.
However, there is solution for the forementioned problem. Firstly, here the main key for finding solution are the parents. They should pay more carefully attention on what the children are interested in. Second, for the young adults, would be helpful if someone of the family members enroll the children in some sport clubs or art clubs and etc. which will help them to keep them out of their rooms and playing all day with the computers.
Here it is the second problem which could lead to antisocial behavior occurred by using non-stop the Internet. Even though, the child is out among his friends still he/she is keeping distance from the others.
Despite that, there is solution of the occurred problem. Firstly, the authorities should take a part of the children with such a problems. Secondly, by making special subject at school will help the youngsters to overcome the problem.
In conclusion, even though this situation is dangerous, there are things that could be done.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: etc.
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Suggestion: etc.
...ildren in some sport clubs or art clubs and etc. which will help them to keep them out o...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a problem' or simply 'problems'?
Suggestion: a problem; problems
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93402777778 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51327254185 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579861111111 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9842572528 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5882352941 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9411764706 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144500655568 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435067278746 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500107768351 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.064564587443 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484859914435 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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