These days children quite rarely get along with others of their age group. Consequently, this hinders their psychological progression and understanding of society to great extent. There do exist some reasons for the exhibition of this behavior. This is definitely a negative influence on them. This essay provides reasons and discusses the grim effects of reduced socializing among children.
To begin with, video games are the primary reason for children isolating themselves gradually. The vibrant color combinations and surreal graphics have been luring children into video games and making them utilize all their leisure time mostly in front of a computer or a mobile phone. For example, a study by Harvard University found that 65% percent of children are addicted to online games and show minimum interest in physical games that include others. In addition, they are fascinated by various cartoon programs aired on television rather than spending time with their fellow kids. These shows include fantasy stories and exquisite locations that are quite appealing to the underaged. As an illustration, most of the underaged are intrigued by animated series and just can get over it. As a whole, video games and television shows are inhibiting children from participating in group activities like games.
Eventually, this has some negative impacts on kids. Firstly, although most of them enjoy games and shows, the reduced physical activity among children creates a myriad of health related problems in them and even leads to obesity. For instance, according to a survey almost 30 percent of children under the age of 12 are suffering from obesity which is quite abnormal when compared to previous generations. Also, spending most of the time in isolation would impact the social behavior of children adversely. Their confidence would diminish while surrounded by people and may even feel intimidated and hesitated to communicate with others. To demonstrate, most of the children who do not get along with others at an earlier age becomes introverted and do not share their problems with people around them. In other words, this creates an alarming situation by posing both physical and mental threats to children.
In conclusion, there are reasons like addiction to games and television for the reduction of socializing among children. This is not ideal for them as it disrupts the physical and mental well being of children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2052.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31606217617 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73939445757 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544041450777 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 647.1 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3751118867 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7142857143 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.380952381 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7619047619 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357699890578 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112924706373 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620193100432 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245877378105 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662626348317 0.056905535591 116% => OK
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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